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Franziska Von Karma (FINAL REDUX)

May 17th, 2015, 1:19 pm

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Reply Luigi_96, May 17th, 2015, 1:53 pm

FINALLY. FINALLY. FREAKING. FINALLY. OH MY GOSH.

I have finally done Franziska Von Karma justice (pun not intended) with an art.
Sure, there are flaws in this drawing. Sure, it's not the best thing I've ever drawn. But there is so much improvement and knowledge that I can do better next time that it doesn't really bother me.

This went through several different versions before finally arriving at what you're seeing now, so let me go over those.
The original sketch (where I first figured out I didn't know how to legs): http://prntscr.com/5l09dj
The first version I ended up posting: http://artbynashew.smackjeeves.com/comics/2064139/franziska-von-karma-for-gigi19972010/
The first attempt at a redraw (never got further than a sketch): http://prntscr.com/76b7qf
The second attempt at a redraw (ended up being the sketch for the head in this version): http://prntscr.com/76b8dc
Original sketch of this version before help from Hanna B: http://prntscr.com/7362ju
The sketch after help from Hanna B (was pretty much completely redone: http://prntscr.com/736hwu
And lastly, the final sketch of this version (before I added the prosecutor's bench in): http://prntscr.com/736kzb

Honestly, if this isn't improvement, I have no clue what is.

Also you might notice my outlines look a bit better than normal (maybe?). That's thanks to the help of smash-chu over on Tumblr, who helped me out with this little line art tutorial.

And finally...
THE LIST:
1 - Magolor (For Ultimate Yoshi)
2 - KK (For Kirby Knight 1000)
3 - Kirby Triple Deluxe Fan Art (For PurpleChickenPineapple)
4 - Pink Owl (For Sapar)
5 - Shovel Knight (For Ultimate Yoshi)
6 - Young Dedede (For Koopario)
7 - Mega Man.exe (For Retro Pikachu)
8 - Shulk (For Ultimate Yoshi)
9 - Franziska Von Karma (For Gigi19972010)


Finally done. Finally.

(and even though I said I know there's flaws, as always, feel free to leave C+C because believe me, I need it)

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User's Comments:

Reply Gigi19972010, May 17th, 2015, 1:57 pm

Something a bit technical: the placement of the mouth is a bit off, it's too much to her left (our right), it should go more under the nose, you know.
Other than that, like I've already said to you, nicely done. c:

Reply Luigi_96, May 17th, 2015, 2:02 pm

@Gigi19972010: Yeah, Tater mentioned the same thing while it was in sketch form, but it's kind of a style choice on my part. ^^'
Thanks~!

Reply Blizzard, May 17th, 2015, 2:13 pm

Woo congrats, you finished!

Reply Luigi_96, May 17th, 2015, 2:16 pm

@Blizzard: Thanks~

Reply SuperScratchkat, May 17th, 2015, 4:03 pm

Can you say, IMPROVEMENT??

Oh wait, you did.

Reply Luigi_96, May 17th, 2015, 5:41 pm

@SuperScratchkat: I did indeed. =P

Reply Koopario, May 17th, 2015, 9:00 pm

This was an awesome result, but I can see a problem with the face placement. However, based off of your reply to Gigi's comment I'll assume that's a style choice.

Reply Luigi_96, May 17th, 2015, 9:56 pm

@Koopario: No, the actual face is nothing stylistic unless you count the big eyes.

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